六級作文點(diǎn)評及范文12月

　　在學(xué)習、工作或生活中，大家都跟作文打過(guò)交道吧，作文是從內部言語(yǔ)向外部言語(yǔ)的過(guò)渡，即從經(jīng)過(guò)壓縮的簡(jiǎn)要的、自己能明白的語(yǔ)言，向開(kāi)展的、具有規范語(yǔ)法結構的、能為他人所理解的外部語(yǔ)言形式的轉化。那么你知道一篇好的作文該怎么寫(xiě)嗎？下面是小編整理的六級作文點(diǎn)評及范文12月，希望對大家有所幫助。

　　The Celebration of Western Festivals

　　1、現在國內不少人喜歡過(guò)西方的一些節日

　　2、產(chǎn)生這種現象的原因

　　3、這種現象可能帶來(lái)的影響

　　Western festivals gain ever-increasing popularity in China. A growing number of people in China are immersed in the thrilling atmosphere of the upcoming Christmas. In comparison with the Spring Festival, the equally high status is given to Christmas by some of them.

　　There are a variety of factors contributing to this craze (trend). First, younger age groups are exposed to western culture and lifestyles through learning English. And festivals are regarded as the highlight of western culture. For example, Valentine's Day provides a vehicle for young adults to show their love. Second, the advancement of economy enables Chinese people to possess increased purchasing power. They are heavily targeted by businessmen, who view foreign festivals as golden opportunities to make money. So they desperately try to boost the atmosphere of foreign festivals.

　　The necessity of celebrating these foreign festivals is widely questioned. People involved are to blame for their loose traditional values. Our home-grown festivals play crucial roles in Chinese traditional culture. However, their foreign counterparts are exerting strong influence on people's values and thoughts. There is no doubt that we should give our priority to Chinese traditional festivals.

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