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英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作怎樣使文章有亮點(diǎn)
從歷年書(shū)面表達高分文章來(lái)看，每篇文章都有亮點(diǎn)，那么英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作怎樣使文章有亮點(diǎn)呢，一起來(lái)看看！
1、使用與人不同的表達方式，特別是提倡打破漢語(yǔ)句子結構的束縛而重組的句子更受歡迎。
1)唐山曾在二十世紀八十年代發(fā)生過(guò)一次大地震。
A: There was a strong earthquake in Tangshan in the 1980s.
B: A terrible earthquake hit/struck Tangshan in the 1980s.
分析：大多數同學(xué)使用了there be結構，這是對的。但是B句卻摒棄了常見(jiàn)句式。另辟蹊徑而使用了“主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)”結構，且使用了terrible,hit/strike這樣的詞匯，更是難能可貴的。
2)你八月十五日的來(lái)信我今天早晨收到了。
A:I received your letter which was written on August 15th this morning.(多數人使用的方式)
B: Your letter of August 15th reached/ got to me this morning.(與多數人使用的方式不同,簡(jiǎn)潔）
2.使用一些強勢句式，如強調句、感嘆句、倒裝句等，增強語(yǔ)句的表現力。
3)湯姆救了我妹妹。
A: Tom saved my sister.(一般句式)
B: It was Tom that saved my sister.(強調句式)
4)我們看到莊稼和蔬菜長(cháng)勢喜人很是高興。
A: We were glad to see crops and vegetables growing well.(一般陳述句)
B: How glad we were to see crops and vegetables growing well.(感嘆句)
◆強調句：可以輕松地將時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、原因、方式等類(lèi)型的狀語(yǔ)從句轉變?yōu)閺娬{句。
It was not until I arrived home that I realized I had left the bag on the shop counter.
It was then that I realized the importance of English.
◆倒裝句：只要句中有介詞短語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ)從句，便可將其提前，變成倒裝句。
Only when I turned right at the crossing did that car crack towards me.
Only by this means can he escape from the big fire.
◆with引導的伴隨結構：可以將狀語(yǔ)從句或并列句中的其中一個(gè)分句變成with結構。
With the sun lighting brightly and the birds singing clearly, I went to school in high spirits
He always likes to sleep with the windows open.
◆巧妙地使用非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞：可以將狀語(yǔ)從句或并列的動(dòng)詞簡(jiǎn)化為非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。
Hearing that, the driver’s wife quickly added that her husband often talked nonsense after drinking. (低級形式：When he heard that, ……)
◆恰到好處的被動(dòng)句：適合應用于較簡(jiǎn)短的句子，這樣顯得語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔生動(dòng)，賓語(yǔ)一般是nothing、anything、everything等不定代詞。
Searched all my pockets, but nothing was found。
◆感嘆句：通常用于開(kāi)頭結尾活躍文章氣氛，凡是“I feel ……”之類(lèi)表達感情的句子皆可如此改造。
How terrible I felt today! I failed again in the math exam.
◆高級定語(yǔ)從句：若定語(yǔ)從句中的動(dòng)詞帶有介詞，只需將介詞移至先行詞后。
We came to a place to which they had never paid a visit before.
◆進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)：有時(shí)會(huì )含有一定情緒，尤其要使用always這樣的富含感情色彩的副詞。
I am always feeling terrible when I take a bus.
◆婉轉表達：需要使用幽默的技巧，主要用于漫畫(huà)型作文題。
I could find nothing but bad luck when I returned the shop after learning that my handbag had been left on the counter.
◆what引導的名詞性從句：將動(dòng)賓結構轉化為此結構。
3、句式多樣,復雜得體。
在寫(xiě)作中應避免使用相同長(cháng)度的相同句型，而應注意句式的變化，如長(cháng)短句結合，簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句與復合句共用，還可使用簡(jiǎn)化句等；一些較復雜的結構如獨立主格，分詞結構等也可使用。
下面的表達中A句簡(jiǎn)單句多，而且多處使用there be結構，顯得單調、乏味，而B(niǎo)句就有自己的特色(請同學(xué)們自己分析)。
5)這是一套25平方米的住房，住房里面有臥室、有洗澡間、有廚房；臥室里有床、沙發(fā)、桌子和椅子等。
A: It's a flat of 25 square metres. There is a bedroom in the flat. There is a bathroom and a kitchen in it, too. In the bedroom, there is a bed; there is a sofa, a desk and a chair as well.
B: It's a flat of 25 square metres, with a bedroom, a bathroom and a kitchen. In the bedroom there is a bed, a sofa, a desk and a chair.
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