12月3日的雅思大作文考的是政府投資類(lèi)話(huà)題,下面是小編為大家整理收集的關(guān)于2016年12月3日雅思真題大作文范文的相關(guān)內容,歡迎大家的閱讀。
Task:Some countries achieve international sporting success by building specialized facilities to train top athletes instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
思路解析:
本年12月首次考試的作文題目是關(guān)于為頂級運動(dòng)員建專(zhuān)門(mén)的訓練設施,讓他們在國際賽場(chǎng)爭金奪銀,這樣做是好還是壞?本題是2014年7月10日原題重現。唐老師在本專(zhuān)欄上期曾提醒大家多注意練習2014年和2013年的寫(xiě)作真題,沒(méi)想到再次一語(yǔ)成讖。不過(guò),即使沒(méi)練過(guò),這個(gè)題目寫(xiě)起來(lái)也還是相當容易的。在解析本題之前,順便說(shuō)一句,關(guān)于體育設施,還有一個(gè)比較常見(jiàn)的問(wèn)法是:在一個(gè)新城市中,是多建體育設施好,還是建購物中心好?
那么,為頂級運動(dòng)員專(zhuān)門(mén)建訓練設施,讓他們在國際賽場(chǎng)上成功,這個(gè)做法好不好呢?如果從肯定的角度,我們可以認為,運動(dòng)員獲得冠軍,最直接的好處就是讓他們收獲獎金,從而改變他們的經(jīng)濟狀況。這點(diǎn)是常識,但很多烤鴨可能都想不到,因為我們中國烤鴨一看到冠軍,立馬想到的是升國旗,奏國歌,其他的好像什么都想不起了。這就是中國烤鴨的思維問(wèn)題所在:因為是用漢語(yǔ)思維,就不可避免地帶上漢語(yǔ)思維的特征,同時(shí)因為都是成年人了,漢語(yǔ)思維還往往比較抽象,但問(wèn)題是多數烤鴨的英語(yǔ)水平不夠好,用英語(yǔ)來(lái)表達漢語(yǔ)想的那些復雜思想還不能做到游刃有余,于是就霸王硬上弓,結果就弄出來(lái)很多漢語(yǔ)式英語(yǔ),順帶還有很多語(yǔ)法錯誤,最糟糕的情況就是把雅思考官弄得一臉蒙逼,他就只好給你個(gè)低分了。那么,怎么辦呢?藥方就是讓這類(lèi)考生主動(dòng)裝傻,或者扮嫩,給自己的思維降降等級。雅思6分作文的思維水平,只要達到我們小學(xué)3、4年級即可,不需要去討論那些高深層次的內容,因為你的英語(yǔ)表達水平達不到。各位烤鴨回去看看,你小學(xué)3、4年級的漢語(yǔ)作文寫(xiě)的什么,你在雅思考場(chǎng)上就用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)什么就夠了!
好,運動(dòng)員得冠軍,除了改善運動(dòng)員的經(jīng)濟狀況外,還有別的什么好處呢?那我們就稍微想遠一點(diǎn),這些運動(dòng)員是不是可以成為孩子們的英雄(role model),從而激發(fā)他們去參加運動(dòng)呢?最后再想多點(diǎn),這些運動(dòng)員得冠軍,是不是可以激發(fā)整個(gè)國家的自豪感(national pride)呢?好,總結起來(lái),國家給頂級運動(dòng)員建訓練設施讓他們得冠軍,就有三個(gè)好處:(1)改善他們自己的經(jīng)濟狀況;(2)成為孩子們學(xué)習的對象;(3)激發(fā)國家自豪感。這三點(diǎn)都不抽象,而且層層推進(jìn),從個(gè)人到他人,最后到國家,層次感有了,邏輯也有了。雅思寫(xiě)作思維就是這么簡(jiǎn)單,就是這么有樂(lè )趣!(特別提示:如果你寫(xiě)不了國家自豪感這個(gè)層次,寫(xiě)前兩點(diǎn)也足夠。寫(xiě)作的核心標準是寫(xiě)正確沒(méi)有,寫(xiě)明白沒(méi)有,而不是一定要寫(xiě)到哪幾個(gè)點(diǎn)!那是國內政治課老師的毛病!)
然而,如果只考慮頂級運動(dòng)員得冠軍的好處,卻不考慮大眾體育設施的建設,這無(wú)疑又是極端了。如果一個(gè)國家大多數群眾沒(méi)有地方鍛煉身體,你得再多的國際冠軍也是然并卵。你的錢(qián)有了,role model 也有了,國家自豪感也有了,可是當你豪情萬(wàn)丈地出門(mén)準備鍛煉身體,卻發(fā)現舉目四望無(wú)處可去,你不回家罵娘才怪!因此,結論很簡(jiǎn)單:政府需要給頂級運動(dòng)員建特殊訓練設施,但更需要給普通民眾提供體育鍛煉設施,但是如果政府預算有限,不能兩者兼顧時(shí),我寧愿政府先投資大眾體育設施,因此只有建立在大眾體育基礎上的冠軍才能真正成為大眾的role model,才能真正給我們帶來(lái)國家自豪感!
Sample answer:
Some countries today invest huge amount of money on specialized facilities for the training of their top athletes to achieve sporting success internationally. I think this investment is rewarding as long as it is not at the expenses of the sports facilities for the public.
The benefits of athletes winning on international sports arena such as Olympic Games or the World Cup Championship are multiple. For the athletes, who often come from economically underprivileged families, a champion can save them from their financial embarrassment, not just for themselves, but for the entire families as well. An Olympic champion, furthermore, can become a national hero and serve as the role model for numerous young people, who will try to be as hard-working, self-disciplined, and persistent as the champion. Most importantly, a hard-won champion title can even bring pride to the entire nation and help the nation to move on, especially in hard times.
However, more international champions should not become the excuse to cut down on the investment on the public sports facilities. A country without adequate sports facilities for the general public can never be truly encouraged no matter how many world champions it boasts. You will understand the frustration when you put on your sports shirt and go out, spurred by the perfect performance of an athlete you love in an important game, only to find that all available gyms and stadiums are crowded, leaving you nowhere to go.
To conclude, international sporting success is necessary, which explains why a country ought to put money into specialized facilities to train its top athletes. However, if the government has to make a choice between the world champions and the public sports facilities, I will support the second one. To my mind, only when the general mass of people enjoy the adequate sports facilities will they be encouraged and motivated by their world champions.
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