留學(xué)是考生參加雅思考試的一共主要因素，準備出國的學(xué)生取得一個(gè)“雅思”成績(jì)后，外國院校將會(huì )根據學(xué)生的雅思成績(jì)減免在國外的語(yǔ)言學(xué)習周期，而如果是具有高中文憑的申請人在取得5.5分的雅思成績(jì)后，將可免去在國外半年至一年的語(yǔ)言學(xué)習，直接入讀國外大學(xué)的預科課程，節省大筆費用。下面小編為大家分享2016年雅思寫(xiě)作真題解析，歡迎閱讀。

　　Some people think children should obey the rules their parents and teachers set and listen to them, but others think less control will help children to deal with their own future life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

　　審題：

　　題目翻譯：有些人認為小孩子需要遵守和聽(tīng)從父母和老師指定的規則。然而另外一些人則認為對小孩少一點(diǎn)的限制會(huì )有利于他們更好的處理和解決未來(lái)生活中的問(wèn)題。討論兩個(gè)觀(guān)點(diǎn)并且給出你個(gè)人的看法。

　　能力考查：這個(gè)教育類(lèi)話(huà)題是雙邊討論的考試指令，考查學(xué)生是否能對于考官所呈現的兩個(gè)觀(guān)點(diǎn)進(jìn)行有效的論證及對比。這個(gè)題目中一般都會(huì )有標志性詞眼，例如some people believe…, while others think…。就這類(lèi)題目的答題要點(diǎn)來(lái)說(shuō)，我們會(huì )建議四段式結構，包括開(kāi)頭引入，兩個(gè)觀(guān)點(diǎn)的分別論證及結尾段給出你自己的看法。

　　題目關(guān)鍵詞：rules, parents, teachers

　　框架構造:

　　1. 開(kāi)頭段(用于引出兩個(gè)觀(guān)點(diǎn)所爭論的內容)

　　2. 論證第一個(gè)論點(diǎn)的合理性，即小孩子需要遵守和聽(tīng)從父母和老師指定的規則

　　3. 論證第二個(gè)觀(guān)點(diǎn)的合理性，即對小孩少一點(diǎn)的限制會(huì )有利于他們更好的處理和解決未來(lái)生活中的問(wèn)題

　　4. 結尾段(給出個(gè)人觀(guān)點(diǎn))

　　Sample answer:

　　In most Chinese families, it is common to find that parents and teachers play a dominant role in children’s lives, which means they have strict disciplines on children. While some people approve of this, others hold the opposite attitude that less control is more important in children’s future growth.

　　Those people who advocate of imposing rules on children have their own reasons. They may think that it is the most effective way for children to develop good behaviors at a very young age. In other words, these rules can help them to be good social members in the future. For example, much control on the use of computers and mobile phones is conducive to children’s physical and mental health. Also, learning how to be polite and respectful to others can be considered as an important skill in children’s future career, as they will inevitably get along with different people, such as colleagues or clients.

　　However, there are still some people thinking that too much control is not beneficial to children. Instead, parents and teachers should give them more freedom to decide their personal affairs; otherwise, they may heavily rely on these rules and may not be able to solve problems on their own. For instance, if children get used to obey their parents, they dare not to make any challenges in their future job, which is a fatal weakness to employers, who show their preference on those creative applicants.

　　My view is that imagination and independence are quite necessary for children if they want to be productive members in the society. As a consequence, instead of giving too much control, which deprives children of the chances to practice these skills, parents and teachers are advised to give children more support to take adventures.

　　思路分析：

　　Introduction:

　　In most Chinese families, it is common to find that parents and teachers play a dominant role in children’s lives, which means they have strict disciplines on children.(用中國家庭舉例，引出題目背景) While some people approve of this, others hold the opposite attitude that less control is more important in children’s future growth.(重新改寫(xiě)了題目，但是沒(méi)有發(fā)表觀(guān)點(diǎn)，這部分觀(guān)點(diǎn)的表達可以放在結尾段去重點(diǎn)描述)

　　Body 1:

　　主題句：Those people who advocate of imposing rules on children have their own reasons.(對于原題第一論點(diǎn)的改寫(xiě)，指出規則對于小孩的重要性)

　　支撐論點(diǎn)部分：They may think that it is the most effective way for children to develop good behaviors at a very young age. In other words, these rules can help them to be good social members in the future.(解釋論證) For example; much control on the use of computers and mobile phones is conducive to children’s physical and mental health.(舉例論證1) Also, learning how to be polite and respectful to others can be considered as an important skill in children’s future career, as they will inevitably get along with different people, such as colleagues or clients.(舉例論證2, 用2個(gè)例子更加直觀(guān)和有效地論證中心論點(diǎn))

　　Body 2:

　　主題句：However, there are still some people thinking that too much control is not beneficial to children.(用however轉折連接詞引出與上段不同的看法，指出了另外一部分人的看法)

　　支撐論點(diǎn)部分：

　　Instead, parents and teachers should give them more freedom to decide their personal affairs; otherwise, they may heavily rely on these rules and may not be able to solve problems on their own.(用otherwise引出對比論證，體現出規則對于小孩的問(wèn)題) For instance, if children get used to obey their parents, they dare not to make any challenges in their future job, which is a fatal weakness to employers, who show their preference on those creative applicants.(舉例論證，引出創(chuàng )新在工作中的重要性)

　　Conclusion:

　　My view is that(用這個(gè)連接詞來(lái)重點(diǎn)表達自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)) imagination and independence are quite necessary for children if they want to be productive members in the society. As a consequence, instead of giving too much control, which deprives children of the chances to practice these skills, parents and teachers are advised to give children more support to take adventures.(在結尾段亮明自己的態(tài)度)

　　總結：

　　通過(guò)上述兩段文章的書(shū)寫(xiě)及分析，不難發(fā)現教育類(lèi)文章的考題內容還是比較適合考生去作答的。但是要注意的是不同考試指令所需要的不同的答題技巧。另外，就段落論證而言，舉例論證，對比論證及假設論證都是雅思作文中常用的論證手法，各位考生在后期備考雅思寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候可以盡量多地去嘗試，做到在考場(chǎng)中能沉穩答題。