求職信切忌空洞，求職信的內容要全面具體，同時(shí)又必須是相互關(guān)聯(lián)的一個(gè)整體，這樣的求職信才能真正對你的事業(yè)起到推動(dòng)的作用。一封理想的求職信應該注意如下的幾點(diǎn)：
一、語(yǔ)言表達要簡(jiǎn)潔明了，避免使用太多的專(zhuān)業(yè) 術(shù)語(yǔ) 和過(guò)分復雜的句子。
一方面用人單位不會(huì )在一份 簡(jiǎn)歷 上花費太多的時(shí)間;另外一個(gè)方面，簡(jiǎn)潔的語(yǔ)言表述也能體現出你珍惜他人的時(shí)間。
二、在求職信的第一個(gè)段落當中應該明確地告訴對方你是在何家媒體看到應聘廣告以及所要應聘職位的名稱(chēng)，例如Your advertisement for (職位名稱(chēng))a Network Maintenance Engineer in (媒體名稱(chēng))the April 10 Student Daily interested me。這樣有助于對方了解招聘信息的有效傳播途徑。
三、語(yǔ)言客觀(guān)實(shí)際。
英文求職信中應避免自己的主觀(guān)判斷性的語(yǔ)言和評論性的話(huà)語(yǔ)，不要過(guò)分渲染自我尤其不要說(shuō)出與事實(shí)不符的能力或特性來(lái)。為了避免過(guò)多的主觀(guān)性描述，你可以在自己的 簡(jiǎn)歷 當中用客觀(guān)的數字和引述別人的話(huà)語(yǔ)來(lái)描述自己的實(shí)際情況。
例如：I have passed CET-6 with a high mark of 96.
四、重視開(kāi)頭、結尾。
在求職信的結尾，我們通常要提及關(guān)于希望得到 面試 的事情。因此，結尾一樣要引起重視。在表達自己的這樣的意愿的時(shí)候，切忌軟弱、羞怯的表達方式，例如：If you think I can fill the position after you have read my letter， I shall be glad to talk with you。
五、表現個(gè)人特色。
求職的信件要具個(gè)人特色、親切且能體現出專(zhuān)業(yè)水平。切不可過(guò)于隨意，也不能拘泥于格式——商業(yè)信函應該是一種既正式、又非正式的文體。句子結構和長(cháng)度應富于變化，使閱信人總保持興趣。內容、語(yǔ)氣、用詞的選擇和對希望的表達要積極，應該充分顯示出你是一個(gè)樂(lè )觀(guān)、有責任心、有創(chuàng )造力和通情達理的人。
另外還有一些內容雖然不屬于求職信的一部分，但是也不能忽視，比如紙張的選用，一般采用品質(zhì)優(yōu)良的A4打印紙，正文用打印機打印出來(lái)。信件的結尾處簽名必須是自己的手寫(xiě)簽名。
Dear leaders:
Thank you for your concern about the use of the valuable time of my cover letter!
My name is XXX， XX， and this year's 22-year-old， height****zero， X years in XXXX on XXX graduated from the University， his loyalty to honest and reliable; will be day-to-day operation of computers， has won numerous awards in the student and to participate actively in hospital the activities of school organizations， have a good life style and high sense of discipline in mind， the awareness of higher consciousness， to the implementation of good order， a strong sense of teamwork， hard work style， not afraid of hardship， and the courage first to. the work of a sense of responsibility strong， and ready to help others on the tasks assigned by the superiors motivated and good at learning on their own hard work， a certain degree of grass-roots management experience.
I have learned is the professional management of industrial and commercial enterprises， but I do not rigidly adhere to professional constraints， of all walks of life are full of confidence and love. Of course， in the spare time， I like to do is to read the Exercise and Sport . I like to see some kind of inspirational books， like her spare time for basketball， soccer and other ball games! I think that there is no good physical work conditions can not be backed up， there is no more flexible mind can not be!
Optional wood and good bird habitat， allow disabled persons to friends. An opportunity to co-operate， to me is a good start， for you are a wise choice. I was a Chollima， as you are pursuing the ability and insight to such a re - The horses only. sincerely hope you can give me a play to realize the value of life， in order to effect social development opportunities. language can only be moved by the people of time， the ability to prove I can. I believe that under your wise leadership， in my diligence efforts， tomorrow I will become a member of your organization best. My credo is: Opportunities favor only those people who are fully prepared.
I wish you every success for the cause.
Waiting for your good news!
Sincerely，
Salute!