寫(xiě) 求職信 的目的在于獲得職位，一封 求職信 無(wú)論如何文辭并茂，令人心動(dòng)，公司hr主管不見(jiàn)到應聘者本人是不會(huì )給予工作機會(huì )的。因此， 求職信 的實(shí)際目的在于獲得面談的機會(huì )。許多人都會(huì )copy網(wǎng)上的求職信范本，導致千篇一律，這是非常不可取的。我們已經(jīng)講過(guò)怎樣寫(xiě)求職信，這次我們來(lái)談?wù)勄舐毿艑?xiě)作中容易被忽略的細節問(wèn)題。

　　一、求職信的第一段說(shuō)明寫(xiě)信的目的，有些專(zhuān)家認為不宜用分詞句子，比如用下面的句子做開(kāi)頭，因為這樣的句子被人用得大多，顯得陳腐，失去特點(diǎn)。

　　replying to your advertisement...
　　answering your advertisement...
　　believing that there is an opportunity...
　　thinking that there is a vacancy in your company...
　　having read your ad...

　　再比較下面三組例句。每一組里面(1)句較差，經(jīng)過(guò)修改后(2)句顯得比較恰當。

　　a:
　　(1) replying to your recent advertisement in the boston evening globe, i wish to apply for the position of sales manager.

　　(2) i am applying for the position of sales manager. i believe my qualifications will meet your exacting requirements.

　　b:
　　(1) i believe after reading your advertisement in this morning's journal that you are offering just the opportunity i am looking for.

　　(2) your advertisement in this morning's journal for an adjustment manager prompted me to apply for this position.

　　c:
　　(1) having read your advertisement in the new york times for an accountant, i thought you might be interested in my application.

　　(2) in your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a competent person, with thorough training in the field of cost accounting. please consider me an applicant for the position. here are my reasons for believing i am qualified for this work.

　　二、在提到希望得到的待遇時(shí)，可用類(lèi)似的句子：

　　i'd prefer not to set a salary, but since you ask, i consider 6,500 a month to be satisfactory.

　　it's hard for me to say what my salary should be set at, but if pressed i would have to ask for a month as an initial salary.

　　i don't feel that i should set my own salary, as i am happy enough to have the privilege of working for you. 　　　　however, i would consider a month satisfactory compensation for my apprenticeship.