- 相關(guān)推薦
2016高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達講義訓練及參考范文
明天就要高考了，今天小編整理了歷屆比較有代表性的高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作范文給大家參考參考，希望可以幫助同學(xué)們提高自身英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作能力，戰勝高考。
2016高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達講義及訓練(8)及參考范文：圖表式書(shū)面表達思路與技巧
假如你是李華，請就本校食堂服務(wù)(canteen service)的狀況給校長(cháng)寫(xiě)一封信。內容包括：
優(yōu)點(diǎn) 不足 建議 食堂干凈 價(jià)格偏高 盡快解決問(wèn)題 飯菜可口 種類(lèi)偏少 服務(wù)態(tài)度好 等候時(shí)間較長(cháng) 詞數：100左右;開(kāi)頭和結尾已為你寫(xiě)好。
Dear Mr. Principal.
I am a senior student of our school. I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school. _____________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
One possible version:
Dear Mr. Principal,
I am a senior student of our school. I'd like to say something about the canteen service in our school.
In general, the service is satisfactory. The hall is clean and tidy. The dishes look inviting and taste delicious as well. What's more, the workers there treat us as their friends, which makes us feel very happy.
However, we feel the price of the meals is a little too high, Besides, we can only have a limited variety of dishes with little change every week. In addition, we often have to stand in line for a long time before we can get the meal. You could understand how precious time is to us students. Therefore, may I suggest something be done to solve the problems so that we can all enjoy our meals at school?
Thanks for your consideration.
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
近期，中學(xué)聘請外教之風(fēng)愈演愈烈，請你結合下表對其利弊發(fā)表自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn)。
好處 1. 提高學(xué)校的知名度。
2. 提高學(xué)習英語(yǔ)的興趣，口語(yǔ)表達能力增強。
3. 更好地了解外國文化。 弊端 1. 花費高。
2. 一些外國人難以適應我國的生活方式，甚至擔心自己的安全。
3. 外國人不了解中國學(xué)生的特點(diǎn)。 自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn) 一切需要靠自己 注意：1. 詞數：100左右 2. 短文應包括表中所有要點(diǎn)
3. 可適當增加細節，以使行文連貫 4. 開(kāi)頭及結尾已給出
Several years ago, when a foreigner appeared in China, many people would gather around and stared at him or her as if they were watching a rare animal.
However, it’s not uncommon to meet some foreigners even in middle schools now. There’s no doubt that schools will be better known. What’s more, it’s good for students to develop interest in English study as well as learn more about foreign cultures. Meanwhile, their oral English will be improved a lot. On the other hand, some foreigners, though well paid, find it difficult to get used to the way of life in a foreign country and they sometimes worry about their safety. The most important thing is that they are not quite familiar with the students. As a result, many students can’t benefit from them.
圖表式書(shū)面表達是常見(jiàn)的一種寫(xiě)作形式,現筆者結合下面一則實(shí)例,談?wù)勗鯓訉?xiě)好這類(lèi)書(shū)面表達。 根據以下表格內容,請以"How to Reduce the Present City Population"為題,用英語(yǔ)為雜志社寫(xiě)一篇短文,闡述你對這一問(wèn)題的見(jiàn)解。
建議I 具體措施:A. 晚婚 B. 一對夫婦,一個(gè)孩子 目的:減少人口自然增長(cháng)(人口出生率) 建議II 具體措施:嚴格控制外地人進(jìn)城務(wù)工經(jīng)商 目的:減少外地人口對城市的壓力 建議III 具體措施:A. 在郊區,建造生活、商業(yè)、文教、衛生、娛樂(lè )、休閑生活小區B. 在城外建造衛星城 目的:吸引城市居民到郊區和衛星城工作和生活
注意: 1)詞數:100左右。 2)參考詞匯:嚴格控制have a tight control, 衛星城 satellite town 一、 認真審題,準確把握提示要求。 1. 審體裁。準確把握體裁是寫(xiě)好一篇文章關(guān)鍵的一步。體裁的形式直接決定著(zhù)考生用英語(yǔ)表達信息的途徑和形式,并影響著(zhù)書(shū)面表述語(yǔ)句的正確性和準確性。 2. 審人稱(chēng)。根據體裁要求,要準確把握人稱(chēng)的使用。是用第一、二人稱(chēng),還是用第三人稱(chēng)。 3. 審時(shí)態(tài)。不同的體裁,其動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)的使用也各有不同。一般情況下,故事、日記等體裁常以一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主要動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài);書(shū)信、便條、通知等體裁常以一般現在時(shí)為主要動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。 分析以上實(shí)例,應以第一人稱(chēng)的口吻進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)。從題目要求、表內要點(diǎn)以及體裁可知,本文時(shí)態(tài)應以一般現在時(shí)為主體時(shí)態(tài)。 二、 理清表內要點(diǎn),進(jìn)行合理發(fā)揮。 圖表式書(shū)面表達其主要內容常被列在表內�？忌紫缺仨毨砬灞韮葍热菀c(diǎn),抓住主要信息進(jìn)行描寫(xiě)�？上劝驯韮人峁┑膬热菀c(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)列出,盡量使用一些較高層次的詞匯或短語(yǔ)以及所學(xué)過(guò)的句法結構(如定語(yǔ)從句、分詞結構等)進(jìn)行描述。例如上述實(shí)例圖表中的內容可用英語(yǔ)列出以下幾個(gè)短語(yǔ)或句式: (1) practice a policy of "Late Marriage" and "One Couple, One Child" (2) reduce the birth rate (3) have a tight control over country people entering cities to do various physical jobs (4) lighten the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population (5) build apartment blocks with shopping centers, schools, hospitals, as well as cinemas and theaters around us or even build satellite towns in the city suburbs or the counties round the cities (6) encourage city citizens to move there to live and work 三、 正確使用過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ),提高文章的連貫性。 過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)的使用是語(yǔ)言的連貫性得以實(shí)現的最常用手段。在句子與句子之間,段落與段落之間恰當地使用一些承上啟下的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)是非常必要的。例如上述實(shí)例,我們可在要點(diǎn)(1)前插入表示時(shí)間順序的過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ) first / firstly, 在要點(diǎn)(3)前插入secondly,在要點(diǎn)(5)前插入finally。在要點(diǎn)(6)前可以插入表示終結關(guān)系的過(guò)渡短語(yǔ)in this way / by this means�，F將中學(xué)課本中應掌握的過(guò)渡詞語(yǔ)總結如下: 1. 表示起始關(guān)系的有: first of all, according to, so far, as far as, to begin with, in my opinion等。 2. 表示時(shí)間順序的有: first, then, later, in the end, finally, at last, after that, since then, immediately, suddenly, soon等。 3. 表示空間順序的有: on the right / left, on one side of, at the top / foot / end of, in the middle of, in front of, at the back of等。 4. 表示并列關(guān)系的有:and, or, also, too, as well as, neither...nor, not only...but also, either...or, not...but等。 5. 表示轉折關(guān)系的有: but, yet, however, while, on the contrary 等。 6. 表示因果關(guān)系的有: because, since, as, for, thanks to, thus, therefore, as a result (of), one reason is that...another reason is that...等。 7. 表示條件關(guān)系的有: if, unless, as (so) long as, on condition that等。 8. 表示讓步關(guān)系的有: although, though, even if, in spite of, after all, in fact, what (who, when, where, how...) ever 等。 9. 表示遞進(jìn)關(guān)系的有:what's more, further more, besides, what's worse, to make the matter worse, also, still, on the one hand...on the other hand等。 10. 表示列舉事實(shí)的過(guò)渡性詞語(yǔ)有:for example / instance, such as, take...for example, as follows, and so on等。 11. 表示總結性的有:in short, in brief, in a word, on the whole等。 12. 表示過(guò)渡性的插入語(yǔ)有: I think (believe, suppose, imagine, guess...), I'm afraid, you know, as is known to us all, as we all know 等。
根據以上圖表式書(shū)面表達題寫(xiě)作思路,上述實(shí)例可整理成文如下: How to Reduce the Present City Population
Our modern city is crowded, and to solve the problem, three proposals are put forward. Most of the people think that we should first practice the policy of "Late marriage" and "One Couple, One Child" in order to reduce the birth rate. Secondly, the city governments must have a tight control over country people entering cities to do various physical jobs so as to lighten the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population. Finally, more and more people suggest that we should build apartment subdivisions with shopping centers, schools, hospitals, as well as cinemas and theaters around them or even build satellite towns around the cities. In this way, city citizens will be encouraged to move there to live and work. If these three proposals are well carried out, the population will be greatly reduced。
得高考英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作者得天下。記住，夢(mèng)想還是要有的，萬(wàn)一考上了呢。小編順便在這里預祝將要高考的同學(xué)們考試順利，高考英語(yǔ)六六六。
【高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達講義訓練及參考】相關(guān)文章：
高考英語(yǔ)復習：突破閱讀理解及書(shū)面表達02-27
高考英語(yǔ)閱讀考前訓練及參考答案03-09
高考英語(yǔ)閱讀理解訓練及參考答案03-09